Hero
Please obey me!
If
thoughts had any power he’d hear me and follow my commands. My beautiful,
impossible to train stallion. But he doesn’t react to my thoughts anymore than
he does to my voice and continues to race around the paddock, kicking up snow
as he goes.
“You’re
almost out of time!” Kor’s hateful voice reaches me from behind. I refuse to
turn around and face him. He doesn’t need to see how close to despair I am.
“If
I can’t saddle and ride him tomorrow it will be curtains for him and
repercussions for you.”
Tears
burn in my eyes because I know he means it. I’m not afraid for myself. Kor’s punished
me in the past and will continue to do so in the future, regardless of whether
or not I manage to train this horse for him. He enjoys it too much. He thrives
on my pain, loves to see me cowering; his power over me is total and he
relishes it.
“You
can stop now.” He sounds impatient. “It’s clearly not going to happen and I
want my dinner.”
Still
without looking at Kor I walk towards the gate and reach to open it. The
stallion—officially still unnamed, although I think of him as Hero—will see
himself into his stable.
“Leave
it closed.” I detect glee in his voice now. “He might as well stay out there.
If he won’t serve me, he doesn’t deserve the heat or the food.”
“But…”
I turn around and close my mouth the moment I see him. I know this mood, the
more I plead for Hero, the harsher Kor will tread him—and me. I lower my gaze,
resist turning back to look at Hero and walk to the house to prepare food for
our tormentor. I try not to worry about sub-zero temperatures and what they’ll
do to Hero, but it’s a futile effort.
I
wait until he’s fast asleep and snoring loud enough to wake the dead before
carefully sneaking out of bed. Without breaking stride I pick up my clothes and
walk through the house, unlock the front door and let myself out. The cold
night air assaults me instantly, making me shiver and my teeth shatter in my
mouth. I dress as fast as I can with fingers so cold I can barely coordinate
their movements. I’m not sure when exactly I decided enough was enough. Was it
while I was cooking and saw Hero shivering in a corner of the field? Or was it
when he put his gun and his whip on the table saying, “one for that useless
piece of meat and one for you”?
There’s
no hope for me, but maybe I can save Hero. After all, what can Kor do? He’ll
punish me until I’m broken anyway. It will hurt less if I don’t also have to
deal with the pain of having seen Hero die.
I
walk to the paddock, and open the gate. It’s all I can do. That and hope that
Hero will recognise the opportunity I’ve given him. Hero trots towards the exit
but I don’t stay to watch him leave, turning back towards the house instead. I
haven’t taken ten steps when I hear a soft neigh in my ear. Hero strides past
me, bends his legs and lies down, turning his head to look at me expectantly.
Joy fills my heart as I decide to trust him and settle myself astride his
strong back. Hero raises himself with ease, as if I weigh nothing, and takes
off towards goodness only knows where.
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words
To
my shame I have to admit that I can’t remember who suggested this wonderful
photo (must do better). If I ever remember or find out, I’ll give credit where
credit’s due. J
As
always, more stories based on the same picture can be found in the Monday
Flash Fics Group on Facebook.
Oh, I liked this. I, too, felt a sense of urgency when I saw the photo. I'm glad you came up with a terrific story to go with it.
ReplyDeleteJust goes to show how good I am at judging my own writing...not. Thank you :)
ReplyDeleteI think this was a great take on this pic. I admit to skimming because 2/3 of my mind is elsewhere at the moment, through no fault of yours or your story, but glad you decided to share it.
ReplyDeleteI know exactly where your mind is,and that's exactly where it should be. Thank you for taking the time to look at my flash and commenting <3
DeleteLOL. You're quite welcome. :D I think I've only ever missed one and that week I missed everyone's. I did go back and read/comment later though, so I'm still at 100% for yours. ;)
DeleteI love it. I particularly like the ending. :)
ReplyDeleteThank you, Kelly :)
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